Poem: Key Final (Graphic)
29.1.16
Keys, cards, trinkets;
So many things
in such a small space
Still; they are purposeful
for what reason would they be there for?
Of course, I’m still open to having more of them
A lanyard can always have more.
More rings to hold keys, and more keys to unlock...locks.
Their weight may take some adapting, but I can respect that
Because sometimes their purpose
needs time in order to be discovered.
But by the time I’ve harbored them for years
Using them for everything every day
Some things may be forgotten
No; some things must be forgotten
In order to be efficient
In order to have...perfection.
Contradicting, I know.
Respectful to time, yet seeking only the flawless
But only through this process of elimination
Opening and closing
Finding what’s meant to be kept and what’s meant to be forgotten
Will I be able maintain perfection.
3 comments
Your graphic card is appealing to the eye and it catches my attention. I like the part where your face is faded by the poem .. it kind of completes the card. One suggestion i would have is to change the petals that are falling to keys. That way it will relate to the card a little more. Overall, nice job!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put your face a little faded behind the words. You could have made the pictures on the wall more bigger somehow so we could see it better. Also, the words are kind of small, a little bigger would be better.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put your face a little faded behind the words. You could have made the pictures on the wall more bigger somehow so we could see it better. Also, the words are kind of small, a little bigger would be better.
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