Semester Portfolio
20.12.15
After finally completing this semester, I feel that I've overcome or at least slightly overcame the hurdle of being inefficient. Whenever I write or do something that is quite complicated, I get what is called a "writers block". It's where one is unable to think of or proceed in writing. This was my biggest obstacle because I absolutely dislike it when I have the energy to complete something, just not the "know-how" to. This semester I learned to keep revising and editing my work to perfection, though I know there is a lot more to it then that; there needs to be an effective strategy to efficiently completing this work; and that is my goal next semester.
I welcome you to learning more about what I have done this semester through this portfolio. Please enjoy.
Portfolio
1 comments
» What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
ReplyDeleteI really liked the conclusion because you know what you have to work on and it wraps it all up good.
» What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
I enjoyed reading about your [Words From The Heart] essay. It was really nice and I can see why you care so much about that word. I would like you to improve on the organization.
» Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
I think that voice is the best trait for you. You know what you are saying and why you are saying specific things in your writing.
» Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
I would like you to work on your organization, as I said before. Some thoughts in your work are sometimes out of place, even though they are great thoughts.
Lorraine Shimabukuro, Grandmother